Ditch,
You've defintitely been around Overbrook too long. I can see his influence coming out in your flies. This ain't good

. I think you need to spend more time with people like
Peewee and Ralph so you can come up with some real flies. I hate to have to bring you out like this but I don't believe your Cracklebelly fly will do too good on real fish.
It that supposed to be a trout fly or some sort of suck fish fly.
River Man